Rewrite the following paragraph by changing the bolded adjectives and adverbs so that the new paragraph has an entirely different meaning.
With a confident grin, Jeanie leaned up against the locker and smiled sweetly up at Brian. She was supremely confident that he would instantly agree to go to the dance with her. Slyly putting her hand on his arm, she said, in melodious tones, "Brian, do you have plans for the dance?" Brian quickly glanced down the hall. Jeanie was bewildered by the nervous, hesitant look in his eye. "Didn't you hear?" he said quietly. "You're not the most popular girl in school anymore. I can't go to the dance with you."
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with a bright grin, Jeanie leaned up against the locker and smiled menacingly up at Brian. She was wickidly confident that he would hesitantly agree to go dance with her. Obiously putting her hand on his arm, she said in a horroble tones, "Brian do you have plans for tonight?" Brian slowly glanced down the hall. Jeanie was bewildered by the confident, instant look in his eye. "Didn't you hear?" He said Loudly. " You're not the most rich girl in school anymore. I can't go the dance with you."
With a confident grin, Jeanie leaned up against the locker and smiled sweetly up at Brian. She was supremely confident that he would instantly agree to go to the dance with her. Slyly putting her hand on his arm, she said, in melodious tones, "Brian, do you have plans for the dance?" Brian quickly glanced down the hall. Jeanie was bewildered by the nervous, hesitant look in his eye. "Didn't you hear?" he says quietly. "Your not the most popular girl in school anymore. I can't go to the dance with you.
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